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Revised layout for Solomons. I have tried to keep in mind the many critiques I was offered.

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:iconthecasualties:
Well man, this layout is very well done. From the nice blue color to the orange to the soft grays, each color has it's own character and adds to the layout. My favorite has to be the Header. Very slick and put together very well considering my taste. The first version of this was very nice as it was. Seeing that it's redone, this piece is far above godly. The top begins with the cool blue and works its way over from the logo to the hover on the navigation bar and finishes with a nice featured area. All the spacing was done accordingly and everything lines up to create a flow. Then the orange section follows with a well done content area. The testimonials attaches nice to the medium gray and to the content. Overall I give this sexy lady a 10/10. It pleases every sense I have... well i bet if i could taste it and smell it, it would smell like my clothes out of the drier and taste like a delicious cheesecake. Anyways dude you've done well. I love this style and I'll take this piece and use it as my inspiration for many other projects I work on. Once again, well done!
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:iconjrdn88:
Overall I think this is an improvement over the last version. You're working with a dark theme which can have challenges as how the viewer's mood reacts with the design. (happy, sad, etc.) I think your choice of complementary colors (blue and orange) help brighten the design up and give attention to those areas. Really nice choice with that. I also really like the overall flow of the design. What I could see changed is that above your navigation links you have little icons representing a home, email, etc. These seem to be redundant with the text links and aren't needed imo. One thing that can help the bottom section with the pictures is to lighten the background value a little bit. Right now it seems like the orange section is floating but with a lighter value for the picture side it will tie it all together better. The last thing that I would consider changing is the PayPal and credit card images near the bottom. To me they don't appear visually appealing. Usually it's not that important to advertise that on the home page. Overall I think you are improving the design and maybe with a few minor tweaks you can push this design further. Nice job.
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:iconfreshz:
Nice, where did you get the icons over ''Contact Us''..?
:iconbadboythemer:
not sure, I have 1000's of icons lol

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:)

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:iconpara-project:
yeah it's good :)

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:iconalisalem:
I would use a light gray text instead of the white for the welcome message.

Also, are you leaving that gray area under the navigation empty? It looks weird that way.

Otherwise, it looks nice.
:iconbadboythemer:
ok, yes the white was to be left as it was, and i'll maybe edit welcome titles.

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:iconxxxnemesis:
can you send me a few of them please?
icq 292020046
email admin@nemesisdesigns.de

thanks ;)

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